Static, Episode 4: Ali Harter

If I offer a little constructive criticism, Ali… you might want to rethink beginning nearly every line with “And”, “And I” and “So”.
I assume it’s a timing thing, but it came off to me as distracting, especially since those moments seem to be more… forte than the rest of the lyrics. I don’t want to be the curmudgeon, especially the first comment off, but it seemed superfluous and detracting from your main lyrics and an otherwise strong and beautiful performance.

Seems kind of like bad form to nitpick an artist’s use of conjunctions on a showcase designed to promote our local talent to new audiences.

Sorry. My bad. Moderator, a removal would seem the only recourse, please. My opinion is bad form.

Don’t tuck your tail now Rob. You curmudgeoned the crap out of this deal. Oh, and can we listen to some of YOUR songs?

Guilty. I’m just some anon schmuck on them internets. What do I know?